The scansion limps as badly as a one legged man with a too short crutch, and the change of meter after the second line is confusing. If you are gonna write emo poetry, do it right.
Betrayed, eh? Sorry about that, but it happens to everyone at some stage, just like first love does. For most folk, the two usually happen fairly close together. And it hurts like hell.
Stop being such a drama queen, get up and get on with your life. Hurt passes and hearts eventually heal. If you let it.
Been there/What else is new/Get over yourself/How did I get here/Next/Whatever/Is this a joke/LIFE SUCKS
Fun...
We all have the ability to hurt others and we all have the ability to be hurt. It's part of life, growing up, evolving into ourselves. It's not so much about experiences we have it's how we choose to deal with them...yes choose. Choose to live, get back up, dust yourself off and live. Although it may seem like the end of your world it's really not, choose to make it a new beginning.
“this feels like a homework question” (insert excessive giggling)
I don't mean to be rude or bitter, because I realize that you guys all have different motives and reasons for answering questions. But why does /this/, which isn't even a question, but rather some weird poem...thing...get "answered"? I'm sure there were plenty of questions that could have actually benefitted someone that could've been chosen...
For the same reason Foo Fighters wrote a song called 'Cheer Up, Boys (Your Make-Up Is Running)', I guess.
I dunno...it was an okay poem. Call it Free Form and you can do anything you want with it! Although I do have to wonder how a poem ended up in an advice column.
It caught my attention. Not so much the poem part, but the underlying hurt.
...and most of us have been there at one time or another.
we accept the love we think we deserve/no Risk, no Reward/The art of love... is largely the art of persistence./Take away love and our earth is a tomb./I stole all these quotes
Bravo :)